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ChipMusic.org / Music / Jellica's music / Victoria and Jacob - There's a War (Jellica's Yesod Node Remox2)
I was asked to do a remix by http://www.victoriaandjacob.net/ and they've just released the pure DMG instrumental version for free on their website.
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Beautiful instruments. I like how fragile everything sounds. Don't know the original either, but I'll look it up to compare and to imagine how it would sound with vocals. Oh, and nice stereo work, too. Can't help with the CC request, couldn't find anything to nag on.
yeah the chord progression was taken from the original, i wanted to fit the singing over the top, but the band preferred the instrumental in the end. I do like repetitiveness though, so I have no intention of progging this baby up. thanks guysssss.
As people have said this is very soothing and beautiful. As you have requested constructive criticism however I'll try and give you some ideas that may perhaps improve this if done properly. I'm not really sure how faithful you have to stay to the original but I thought this could have benefited from a few chord substituions here and there and/or a chord progression change at some point. Also a modulation -could- have been nice. Also I think with such a beautiful track like this some slight dynamic changes here and there could add a great overall effect. Great track though mate! I really do like it a lot. /downloaded
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