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i uploaded a lot of songs today but this is the best!
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Sweet. I like that awesome clicky duty change instrument.
i think that rabbits are much more violent, nasty and braver than this song makes out, have you seen the well known documentory 'watership down'?
I would do only one thing to this tune because its theme is catchy and that little drum fill half-bar tag has a lovely effect on the phrasing; please try to add one more section that begins with a different tonality (I imagine the subdominant, like the chord D if this tune is in the key of A) and all it would need is maybe a pattern or two of it to bring it back to the home key and then you'll get a grand climax or big ending feel.
As it is, this is lovely "walking around town" music, I wouldn't change a thing in the sounds themselves.
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This makes me feel like this ^_________________________^