<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Constructive Criticism]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/ Thu, 23 May 2013 16:31:14 +0000 PunBB <![CDATA[HIgh on caffeine(CC)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11117/high-on-caffeinecc/new/posts/ Bit wish says:

First time posting anything of mine here,hope you enjoy it.



Song was done on a dmg/colur depends if i travel and stuff.BUt recorded it with dmg for best soundquality.


https://soundcloud.com/zhakilic/chipdea … n-caffeine

Hope you enjoy.This is my third song.

]]> Thu, 23 May 2013 16:31:14 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11117/high-on-caffeinecc/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Some original songs. What do you think?]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11100/some-original-songs-what-do-you-think/new/posts/ meegosh says:

hey, here's a link to some songs i've put together over the last year or so.  was wondering what people think.  any feedback (good or bad) would be appreciated.  i'm going through other people's posts and will return the love.  thanks.

http://davidorigmusic.weebly.com/chiptunes.html

]]> Thu, 16 May 2013 16:57:03 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11100/some-original-songs-what-do-you-think/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10300/feedback-on-a-hardcore-chiptune-track/new/posts/ SketchMan3 says:

Hey guys! could i get some feedback on this song? Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dcore-demo

Thanks! smile

]]> Mon, 13 May 2013 17:27:17 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10300/feedback-on-a-hardcore-chiptune-track/new/posts/ <![CDATA[I suck at drum and bass, how can I improve this? (2xlsdj)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10676/i-suck-at-drum-and-bass-how-can-i-improve-this-2xlsdj/new/posts/ jefftheworld says:

http://chipmusic.org/dire+hit/music/hyp … ync-2xlsdj

]]> Mon, 13 May 2013 07:56:26 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10676/i-suck-at-drum-and-bass-how-can-i-improve-this-2xlsdj/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Opionions And NetLabel selection]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11064/opionions-and-netlabel-selection/new/posts/ SketchMan3 says:

We need opinions
Also are there are any labels for release chipmusic like this?

https://soundcloud.com/derklork/derklor … -dotmatrix
https://soundcloud.com/derklork/derklork-bagup-filez
(sorry for the warez productions thingy)

]]> Mon, 13 May 2013 03:26:32 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11064/opionions-and-netlabel-selection/new/posts/ <![CDATA[CC maybe?]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11055/cc-maybe/new/posts/ Chiprokku says:

decided to try some new stuff out, let me know what you think. smile

http://soundcloud.com/americantoploader/voice-s

]]> Sun, 12 May 2013 23:25:27 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11055/cc-maybe/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Need some CC and ideas on a wip song]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11044/need-some-cc-and-ideas-on-a-wip-song/new/posts/ Bit wish says:

Just wrote this yesterday and I have already changed/added a couple of things.  The kick is a little softer, the snare is a little louder, and I added some soft 50% squarewaves to the chill parts.  I feel stuck on what to do with the wav channel though and I'm looking for ideas on things to try as I feel that there is much more potential there.  Any other CC on the song is appreciated as well.  Also, tried adding eq and reverb with a couple of vsts and I'm not sure if I like it or not yet.

https://soundcloud.com/squarebit-1/surp

]]> Fri, 10 May 2013 23:43:22 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11044/need-some-cc-and-ideas-on-a-wip-song/new/posts/ <![CDATA[New tune: Future dub & some guitar. How bout some feedback?:)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10860/new-tune-future-dub-some-guitar-how-bout-some-feedback/new/posts/ helgeland8bitsquad says:

New laptop reggae - dub tune!

Combining some laptop reggae and a some simple guitar chords. What you think? smile

http://soundcloud.com/helgeland8bitsquad/motion-dub


Big love - Helgeland 8-bit Squad

]]> Wed, 08 May 2013 18:34:10 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10860/new-tune-future-dub-some-guitar-how-bout-some-feedback/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Criticism on Metal + Chiptune]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10997/criticism-on-metal-chiptune/new/posts/ Cuddle Television says:

I decided that since I like metal and I like chiptune, why not combine them?
This isn't just an 8bit verson of a metal song.
I'm happy to read all of your thoughts and ideas.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTP5tGrNzZw

]]> Tue, 07 May 2013 23:56:07 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10997/criticism-on-metal-chiptune/new/posts/ <![CDATA[I Need CC for BRKage~]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11016/i-need-cc-for-brkage/new/posts/ basspuddle says:

I posted a song called ''BRKBRKBRK'' and I'd like to recieve some feedback on it, please and thank you!

]]> Tue, 07 May 2013 03:58:01 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/11016/i-need-cc-for-brkage/new/posts/ <![CDATA[[First chiptune] Elektronikz - Jah Makin' It Dub (Reggae style)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10448/first-chiptune-elektronikz-jah-makin-it-dub-reggae-style/new/posts/ SketchMan3 says:

Hi, I'm a newbie as far as making chiptunes and stuff, but I made this pretty neat reggae-influenced track and I need some feedback. I was inspired by the "Rude Boy 8bit" album and other such reggae-styled chiptunes. I guess this would also be considered "fakebit" because I made it using a VST on FL Studio and various FX plugins. Sorry if people don't like fakebit, if so, I understand.
https://soundcloud.com/elektronikz/jah-makin-it-dub
Thanks!

]]> Sat, 04 May 2013 04:10:57 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10448/first-chiptune-elektronikz-jah-makin-it-dub-reggae-style/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Hello everyone :)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10358/hello-everyone/new/posts/ Solarbear says:

Hello I'm trX, new one here:)

I've got something. It's my first track in chiptune style, and i think it's good, my friends says it too, but I'am hungry for advice,
What can you tell me about it? Also can you help with any tips about mixing chiptunish tracks? It is all right to combine modern samples/synthesis with old school ones to get better sound? What hardware should i start with, I'am thinking about buying Amiga 1200, I used to have one in childhood and I miss It so much sad

trX - Lets play , track on soundcloud  smile

]]> Sat, 04 May 2013 03:03:32 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10358/hello-everyone/new/posts/ <![CDATA[I'd like some critique on those big songs]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10872/id-like-some-critique-on-those-big-songs/new/posts/ ircluzar says:

Oh, hi.

I've spent the last years making those big chiptunesque tracks of music.

The tracks are hosted on my artist page on redscientist.com

http://dome18.redscientist.com

you can listen or download the tracks on my page

Here is the runtimes of the albums(tracks)

Dome18 - 1989 : 29 min
Dome18 - Broken Game : 28 min
Dome18 - Delta Marsh : 18 min
Dome18 - Underground : 20 min
Dome18 - Overworld : 32 min

I hope you guys like lenghty chiptune

have fun and comment pls

]]> Thu, 18 Apr 2013 02:56:30 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10872/id-like-some-critique-on-those-big-songs/new/posts/ <![CDATA[please critique my album :)]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10836/please-critique-my-album/new/posts/ tofu paloma says:

hello people's, I've gone through mixing/mastering my album three times now but I still feel like a certain oomf is missing. please have a listen when you have time and let me know some pointers or if you hear anything off. would really appreciate it.

http://tofupaloma.bandcamp.com

I'm going to run it through some additional arrangement/mix tomorrow but wanted some tips to keep in mind. to the point where I feel I have to record each channel individually. :\

~tofu

]]> Sat, 13 Apr 2013 19:16:31 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10836/please-critique-my-album/new/posts/ <![CDATA[Give this song constructive criticism, please]]> http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10790/give-this-song-constructive-criticism-please/new/posts/ Nappi says:

Hi. I made another song. I actually made this quite a while ago but I finally added some finishing touches to it.
The song is rather short because I ran out of ideas again. I hope you like it.

http://chipmusic.org/nappi/music/carbonator

]]> Tue, 09 Apr 2013 19:48:37 +0000 http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10790/give-this-song-constructive-criticism-please/new/posts/