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Michigan

What up, yo? I posted my fourth LSDJ track and I'd like some critiquing, particularly in the beat/bass line department. I feel like I focus on the leads too much, but struggle to make the backing memorable.

Here's the link:
https://soundcloud.com/lucas-noah-1/windless-sail-lsdj

Thanks, in advance, for even listening.

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Oklahoma City, OK

This is sounding pretty good! The bass does sound a little quiet so you could probably turn the vol. up on it a little bit. The percussion stuff is really clear and sounds good, but you may try experimenting with different rhythms, and maybe even different sounds as well.

Hope this helps, good work so far. Cheers man!

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Michigan

Thanks for the feedback! I'm having a hard time because I'm so used to having a sequencer for things like triplets and such. I love lsdj, but learning how not to do staright 4/4 is my hurdle. I'd love to figure out how to do some sunsoft nes style stuff down the road because who doesn't love the return of the joker or journey to silius soundtracks?