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This is more electronic and less chip, but none the less I still figure I could get some wonderful feedback on it's structure.
I have been trying to improve my songs' structures as of late; with this particular track I think I have improved it's structure, but I find that I think I end up reusing melodies too often, and so I end up with a repetitive track without enough variation in both what you're hearing and when you're hearing it.

https://soundcloud.com/ateno/a-day-in-the-park

CC concerning the structure, and anything else you find needing improvement much appreciated.