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So I made this west coast rap song but I feel something is lacking. While I know it needs to a rapper to really be complete, I think the verses in particular are cumbersome and repetitive. This being said, I don't want to get all experimental with it. Simple 90's gangsta rap. I just feel like the song is lacking in teeth somehow.

https://soundcloud.com/zachcourseymusic … st-1-rough

tl;dr
Give me ideas to spice up my gangsta rap song

Last edited by Zach Coursey (Feb 26, 2016 2:55 am)