Hey guyzz, i feel i've improved greatly with these tracks.
Do you guys think the same? and could i get some advice on what to add to the first track, i'm thinking of adding guitar

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dbye-would

http://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabomb … eboy-cover

Thanks and have a good holiday!

Last edited by I'mHeadingForABombShelter (December 7, 2012 9:05 pm)

On the first one, you could wait for the last note in the intro to fade out completely before the drums come in. It feels like you rushed in.

On the second one, holy shit, it's a rainbow road cover that got the notes right. You should beef it up with some chunkier sounds so it's not as boring [ Make it actual snescore? wink ]

Hey I guess you have improved.

Last edited by Xuriik (December 5, 2012 11:47 am)

Xuriik wrote:

Hey I guess you have improved.

Nice chords on the first one. @0:37 Bass(?) seems like just a random note thrown in completely unrelated to what the chords are doing, but I could just be missing something. Also, while it doesn't feel empty, I feel like it's kind of a waste not to use the 2nd pulse channel for something in the earlier parts of the song. Even just, like, a little pitch bend or sweep to compliment the noise snare (think Megaman). But still, it sounds cool. Nice arps.

Second tune sounds really cool. Bass is nice and bassy. big_smile Really cool.

As for CC, I feel like snares could be a bit snappier, but that's just nit picking.

Xuriik wrote:

On the first one, you could wait for the last note in the intro to fade out completely before the drums come in. It feels like you rushed in.

On the second one, holy shit, it's a rainbow road cover that got the notes right. You should beef it up with some chunkier sounds so it's not as boring [ Make it actual snescore? wink ]

Hey I guess you have improved.

1) That's what i did in the original haha, but then people complained about the piano being to long

2) Thanks man, ill mix in some different sounds with that... maybe some guitar! also, the "Snescore" was a joke hahaha

Thanks!

SketchMan3 wrote:
Xuriik wrote:

Hey I guess you have improved.

Nice chords on the first one. @0:37 Bass(?) seems like just a random note thrown in completely unrelated to what the chords are doing, but I could just be missing something. Also, while it doesn't feel empty, I feel like it's kind of a waste not to use the 2nd pulse channel for something in the earlier parts of the song. Even just, like, a little pitch bend or sweep to compliment the noise snare (think Megaman). But still, it sounds cool. Nice arps.

Second tune sounds really cool. Bass is nice and bassy. big_smile Really cool.

As for CC, I feel like snares could be a bit snappier, but that's just nit picking.

I should add a sweep, ill do that ahah
and thanks, i like the arps as well!

STOVE SEX

Bit wish wrote:

STOVE SEX

Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dbye-would

I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dbye-would

Wow. That sounds pretty epic. Good stuffs. I think this is a good direction.

SketchMan3 wrote:
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Just got some guitar done for the first track! take a listen

https://soundcloud.com/imheadingforabom … dbye-would

Wow. That sounds pretty epic. Good stuffs. I think this is a good direction.

Thanks man!

If you haven't heard the guitar version http://chipmusic.org/i%27mheadingforabo … a-fuck-you