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North Carolina, USA

First full-length song made in LSDJ. Looking for constructive criticism as I feel some parts are still... off. It doesn't really have any set song or genre that it is modeled after. It is meant to be somewhat dissonant, so keep that in mind.

Some parts sound muddy to me. Not sure what I want to change. Advice/tips/ideas much appreciated!

I'm also not 100% sold on the ending.

https://soundcloud.com/3picide/scope

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New Albany Indiana

Kinda neat for a first track.