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BLABUH1

BLABUH1

By kubzoey on Jan 26, 2014 2:19 pm

Made on MilkyTracker. My third attempt at doing chipmusic. Set a bit higher volume, that tune is a bit quiet recorded. Made like a month before submission.
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This is good. I'd throw in some type of percussion. heart

Yep, I know what you mean wink It sounds thin and dry... Like from a radio.. That's true.. I've been thinking about changing it..
Everything is made of one sawtooth sample, but on other instruments.. Like with vibratto, or other volume rising..
I can't tell anything like that... Man, you just describe the music as you hear it and for me that's good wink
Yeah, I thought about that after reading your comment.. Like another fast part or something in the same key... So your comment did it's work wink But now education and my 'adult exams', that's not friendly with music..

I meant, like, thin sounding. "Treble-y" as Jansaw put it (I guess?). It's hard to describe. Like the difference between a 12.5% square wave and a 50% square wave. One is more thin and one is more fat sounding. You can probably tell I have no real knowledge of music terminology and, to an extent, theory smile Anyway, it isn't anything bad. It was just, you know, my way of suggesting "maybe try making a song and use this as an intro" without flat out telling you what to do wink

This is pretty cool! It sounds like it would be a great ambient-type track if it was longer. It's very evocative to me.

Thank you smile I really appreciate that someone loves it. I was thinking about making next part of it, like faster or something. But for now that's just thinking. Got a lot to do with my education for now and all that winter does deppressive things in my head, that's not a good inspiration. I think you meant Vaka by Sigur Ros.. Yea, now I realize I could have rip something from them wink Post-chip.. sounds funny wink But I just name it as "music" smile

The instrument timbres are just very treble-y. But I love it. This is a great song, man. I'd like to see it develop into something fuller, for sure. It reminds me of an intro to a sigur ros song (not one in particular). I think this could be a great post-chip type song, if you had to put a name on it;P

Thanks for opinion smile
I think that volume won't be a problem. Yeah. I just got problem in my head, it's obsesive song randoming.. I could have made it like in a cycle, with a repetitive theme, but i just don't like it very much in my songs..
What do you mean by 'tinny'? Should there be more background? 

This isn't something negative but it sounds just like an intro for a song. I think it has to do with the low volume and it sounding kinda tinny.

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