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A song I've been working on with LSDJ. My first serious attempt at music making so constructive criticism would be much valued.
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I LOVE the sound of those hi-hats, lol. So watery. I don't think I've heard that type of sound before. Good stuff. PLEASE finish or at least give us some more lol. You can't just leave us hanging when it gets good >.<
Maaaaan.... I hate listening to "My First..." songs when they are better than the songs I'm writing... Really excellent work. Those harmonies really get to me Q ^ Q
I think infodrive had the only recommendation I had with the hi-hats. Be sure to let us know when you have the finished product!
Wow. This being you're first attempt makes it that much more impressive.It really is a fantastic piece. You seem to have a really diverse understanding of instrument creation. I dig the noise kick I heard in there, and you used panning well. Overall, my only criticism would be on the hats between :35 and :52. I feel like they could use a little flair because the rest of your hat work is spot on. Great work!
You've got it going on. Finish it. Always keep working on you stuff until you're happy with it. I personally really dig it man.
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