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Hey,
A metal syle track inspired by Vinnie moore/shrapnel records and shoot'em up like Recca. Also my first attempt at writing a metal ( guitar ?) solo with a tracker.
Hope you dig it .
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@cTrix : Great, it means a lot coming from you .Thanks for the advicen,it will go straight into the " how to add dynamics" folder : ) and thanks for your tutorial on LSDJ, that helped me a lot .
Love the FDS usage here :-) Metal arps are strong. My only complaint would be it lacks a little bit on the high hat front. I can hear you are using noise for crashes and washes. Maybe something at volume 5 or 6 that just adds a bit more drive as it goes during the more furious parts. Great echos, etc :-)
The balance and level of control is really nice. Your harmonies are sweet, and they stay out the way of your melodic lines. I really like your transitions too. Compositionally, I can't think of anything that really needs changing, it's a solid piece.
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