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I've written three little loops so far, but this is the only one I like. It's a C-minor experiment that I probably didn't need to loop, but I was proud of the breakdown in the middle.
W-What do you think?
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After I uploaded it I realized that the buildup was longer than normal, so when I revisit this I'll definitely change that. I'm glad however that it's coming along - that's not bad for only three days of experience! ^^
Thank you for your feedback!
i reckon it's coming along, the melody in the middle is fun, the build up is a bit too gradual for me and could do with more phrasing and shape, what about a super trim version where you dive right to it, just from 1:36 - 2:15 and then end? maybe with a little weird intro thing to kick it off?
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