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Bad Wolf

Bad Wolf

By Das Hype Machine on Dec 4, 2010 12:26 pm

I have been working on this for the past week or so. This song will be on an album I am working on.

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

Member has requested constructive criticism

Thank you very much. You are really helpful.

I saw your request for Constructive Critique at 8bc, so I thought I'd just reply here. First I'll start out with what I thought you did well. The beat is a bit on the basic side but it sounds nice. It's a good sound to build off of. Those arpeggios you had going sounded pretty cool, and slowing it down at the end was a nice touch. Now for some suggestions for improvement. I think after you get your intro established you should use the wav channel to put bass notes in between your sampled wav kick drum. What you have now is a nice progression but it repeats a lot. Try to come up with an alternate part to add to this with different chords to keep the song fresh. As a last bit of advise, I would vary up the drums just a bit more and sneak a more prominent melody in there when you aren't using both pulse channels for arpeggios. What you have now is a great bass, but if you squeeze all you can out of those four channels it'll really shine through. I hope that helps smile.

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