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Korg Ds 10 Plus. I really hate 8bitcollective because you can hardly get any feedback as a new musician to the chiptune culture, all i ask is for some feedback on the track!
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I really like this, I agree with the mist toggles' advice, but i also really like it, I don't know if i've ever heard anything like this from DS-10, is plus much different?
This is a very nice track! Nice taste on the sounds too. What I would advice is to lift the kick only. Maybe also drop the bass as DKSTR said, but only a little bit because it is a very nice one 
. But I wouldn't put the hi-hat and snare any louder. You could 'separate' the hi-hat from the snare a bit more by up-pitching the hi-hat a little bit. Maybe also the tone of the lead a bit less sharp, so that it doesn't jump out so much when it goes to high octaves (0:19). The song starts nice and faded-in, but kind of ends leaving you hanging. But this is all details. Great mood making song.
It's pretty good, I would put the drums louder and the bass little bit quieter. Oh and that one thing that pops up at 1:10 or so is little bit too loud too (at least on headphones). But if this is one of your first songs, great start.
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ChipMusic.org / Music / FFFFFF Witch's music / Luxury Of Thieves v1