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By Fauxhound on Sep 20, 2010 8:00 am

LSDJ on a "play it loud" DMG

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Likey Likey!

This is good, especially for a newcomer. A few criticisms: It's good that you're experimenting with instrument synthesis, however almost all the variation besides a few arpeggios and glissandi is on changing instrument sounds. I suggest next time you focus on creating distinct sections rather than setting up one section and tweaking it for the entire duration of the track; I understand that as a beginner this is probably more an experimentation than a proper composition, and that's important when it comes to getting to know the software. Also I would suggest cutting down the length of the piece as well; It's always preferable to leave the listener wanting more rather than letting the piece drag on. Anyways, good first upload and hope to see more from you.

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