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The Rise

The Rise

By Fufugagakikilala on Feb 22, 2013 11:30 am

My second tune~
I'm still practicing composing acceptable tunes and experimenting with the way things flow.  I'm pretty new at this too smile

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Thanks again for giving more input. I've sorta had problems with the sound volume because the it all sounds leveled when I'm playing in on my android phone. But when I transferred the whole data into my emulator on the pc. The noise channel and blows out and the wave channel volume gets significantly low. Problem is if I want to record direct from the jack from my phone; There's the ticking and static problems (Which I'm already not gonna do anymore). Anyways, I'm glad you like the melodies and I hope I can put in more progression into them for more variety. Hehe, inspirations came from house music though tongue

I like the higher octave reply thing. I thought you could have made your cymbal noise better, I'd have had it delay into like 1/2 volume level and stay that way for a bit to fill the track up a bit, I also would've brought down its general volume level. You incorporate some of the best melodies I've heard from a newcomer and the best part is that it's not house, as hypocritical that is of me to say tongue

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