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Blue Two

Blue Two

By HolyNegative0 on Feb 21, 2012 1:43 am

My first complete song ever. BD
It's actually pretty crappy, but yeah. XD I'll probably edit a couple of things. The drumline is actually derived from a drum cadence at my school called "Blue." Bet you can't guess where the name came from.
Composed entirely on Nanoloop for the iPhone, recorded track by track into Audacity, then edited and exported.
Credit to Oliver because I used the "default_old", though I did edit the sounds a bit.

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial Share Alike (BY-NC-SA)

Member has requested constructive criticism

cool!

well done this is pretty good ~ nice bass

Lacks a main melody, the thing you used as melody now could turn out to be a nice background melody or you could even turn it into harmony parts.

Finally someone that thinks things through before releasing any garbage to the public eye.
What criticism do you want? Keep up the good work, you're on the right path smile

First chip song? Well done! Nice melodies and atmosphere, but lacks variation. I thought it drug on for a bit long.

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