Blue Razzberry
By Imaginary on Jan 27, 2015 2:12 am
New LSDJ jammer. One of many like it to come.
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New LSDJ jammer. One of many like it to come.
This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)
Member has requested constructive criticism
Musically I tend to go places that are a little loose sometimes, but I try to keep everything rooted somehow, (same chord progressions, drum patterns etc.) Right now I'm kinda trying to feel out what I can get away with in LSDJ... I'll take your advice of a more focused & complex main lead and try to apply it to my next jam.
Fun stuff, sir. Keep up the good work. If I may offer some constructive criticism, then I would say the piece could use a tighter structure. Give a slightly complex but still catchy riff (if that makes any sense) to keep the track focused.
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