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Lucid Dreams

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Lucid Dreams

By JerBearX on Apr 4, 2013 6:21 am

I made this on LSDJ, and it is my most recent, and probably most complex song. I am really happy with the way this one turned out. Critique as you see fit, and enjoy! big_smile

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

Member has requested constructive criticism

Thanks for the comment! and YES! I totally get where you are coming from, and it is my biggest downfall. What happens is, I'll get a chain that I really like, and it sounds super cool, yet the curve of the song becomes redundant and I instantly snap for a change-up in the style of the song. It is nothing short, really, of musical ADD. That's the one I am really trying hard to work on!

It sounds cool. The arrangement feels a bit disjointed at times, though. I don't feel much connection between the different sections. I like the use of the noise channel in those little phase outs that happen every so often. It's really blended in well with the rest of the music.

Pitter patter go the raindrops on a tin roof falling...

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