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Monetana

By JonnyNero on Oct 28, 2010 3:48 pm

The LSDJ track of a song on my upcoming album.  I fully intend to lay guitars, percussion, and vox over this.  I always like hearing CC, it only makes me better.  I'd REALLY like some opinions on the schitzophrenic breakdown (just after the slide).  That part comes right after I beat on a drum for a couple of phrases and will come up with some wacked out guitar line to make it even more jarring.  I just want to be sure the foundation is solid before adding anymore craziness.

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Feb 2, 2012 8:16 pm

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BoF3Ryu

Dude this is a nice piece of work,  But it has hardly any views and no reviews?! This site needs more traffic.

Anyhow, It blends beautifully into each section   And understanding this is not finished, 1:50-2:10 Feels empty, but I'm sure it won't once you're  finished. 3:40 and pretty much everything after it is just fine.   Oh, is there a name for the high pitched noise that is between 0:21-0:42?   I enjoyed how you utilized a variety of sounds throughout the arrangement.                    I look forward to listening to the full version, good luck!

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