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Waiting (Demo 2)

By L-tron on Feb 5, 2011 1:38 pm

LGPT rAw. Experimental track. Brushing around with atonality and production quality. Sorry Bleo and irrlichtproject.

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Thanks for the CC, irrlichtproject. Good call on the Bass. I also agree that the track needs more variation melody wise. Interesting suggestion on the pitch down 1 half tone. I'll give it a shot.


hahaha don't worry, i like atonal stuff if it's done well. i don't like trance so much but looking past that, i think this is quite nice stuff, has a great ambience and such. love the part with the clicks and pops (4:04 and beyond). the bass could use some more conture/overtones though, as well as some more variation melody-wise. also when playing the main note, the bass is a bit too quiet i think. but well, production quality is overrated wink on a side note, i wonder what this track would sound like pitched down 1 halftone. anyway keep up the good work!

maybe I should ditch the atonal aspect and tighten it up.

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