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This is an unfinished demo track from the album I am currently working on. This is unfinished. The track still needs to be worked on and re-arranged. I am simply posting what I have written so far and asking for tips and criticism.
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Wow! Reminiscent of chipzel somewhat but I really dig it! Keep it up!
Thank you for the well worded advice, I definitely need to add in a breather or two in there. I like songs that are agressive and in yo face as you said so I'm glad that came across in the song. I have no background in music. I have never taken lessons of any sort so I am constantly learning. That being said I had to google "syncopated rhythm", but I believe I understand now. Thanks for your help. I really appreciate it.
Nice. The song is aggressive and complex. Great usage and of different tones. I also like the syncopated rhythms and strange/uneasy feel. It makes me feel as if I was taken out of my comfort zone and placed in a strange new world. One thing to suggest? I think it would be dynamics. The song is in yo face from the beginning to the end without a breather. Then again, it's a demo. I know how the process goes as the song constructs. Thanks for sharing.
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