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Eat that cheese you fool

By Pastel Arsenal on Aug 10, 2010 1:56 am

Fakebit glitch-hop.

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Member has requested constructive criticism

@ muffins: I think you've got the right idea. Perhaps another break or bridge would keep the song a bit more interesting. Thanks for the ideas.

@ arfink: thanks and take your time! Always appreciate your ideas and opinions. Hope the developement is going well!

Haven't weighed in on your stuff in a while, pastel, I been really busy with the new NES cart development. Excellent work as usual, and I'll go thru your growing library and have a close listen so I can give you some critique. smile

I love the tune you've got going here. The entire feel of the song is just awesome. The bass totally envelopes you but the snare and everything else still shines through. My only suggestion would be to have some real intense breakdowns in there. The song stays pretty calm for the most part. The awesome break at 1:45 is what I think you need some more of! The heart of this song is definitely always going to be chill so feel free to go wild here and there! Even break away from the original tune if you have to.

Regardless, I'm downloadin' this!

thanks jikoo! I appreciate the compliment. Glad you dig it!

Excellent! I like this tune very much!

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