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Restrain from entering my bedroom

By PleaseLoseBattle on Feb 10, 2014 4:06 pm

Track made for the DENDYcompo II, with Famitracker (2a03 + VRC6).

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This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

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I just listened to it, and i really like it! ^_^  it's so happy and sweet, and I'm inspired to have a good day big_smile

Thanks ! I really thought this part would be cool, but I'm glad to have some feedback on it.

Yep. 1:45-2:00 sounds weird. But all the rest is really good. Bookmarked.

Thank you ! It really motivates me to read things like this.
The weird rythmic parts were made on purpose, so no it's not a programming mistake, but yeah I was wandering if it wasn't too much... So maybe it was smile
Maybe trying too much in ryhtmical tricks ended up just sounding weird. I'll keep that in mind.
Thanks for your feedback man !

I really like the melodies in this one; it's a happy tune, but in a way that has a bit of warmth and gravity, in part because of the darker parts. I'm not totally sure about the weird rhythmic elements in the part starting from about 1:45-2:00. Most likely if I listen to it ten more times I'll love it, but for now it just sounds like a mistake in the programming.

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