I Hung By My Neck
By RAWMEAT on Feb 13, 2012 1:19 am
Hello, wat you think?
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Hello, wat you think?
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sounds like doom, it's quite tidy and sort of stiff and flat to me, i would give it more life by making it a bit more sloppy like with little variations in volume between notes, more phrasing, accent on certain dramatic notes (not just mono-volume), notes not so quantised, maybe a tiny bit of reverb and sustain here and there on the lead, i like all your short terse melodies and rhythms, super fun!
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