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ChipMusic.org / Music / Reverund Brown's music / Jungle Book Burning
Just looking for some feedback, I'm new to this and I'm aware it hasn't been mixed and without vocals sounds a bit repetative
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It is repetitive and chaotic at some parts. It sounds like you're trying to incorporate a lot of ideas into one track (which is a common mistake among new musicians.) I'd say drop some of the chaos and smooth out those parts. Those generic jump and coin sounds could probably go, I'm just not a fan of that stuff when it comes to chiptune unless used sparingly. Make your leads stand out a little more, I've listened 3 times and it's hard to discern between your melodies and harmonies though this could just be the recording.
Overall it needs work but I do dig your noise drums and it has potential. Would definitely like to hear it with vocals and a better recording.
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