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ChipMusic.org / Music / Shinobi MC's music / The Lonely Hills of the Gravelands
Looping, uptempo ARPG style track set in a spooky place.
Nice little solo in the second repetition of parts A/B.
DAW: FLStudio20
VST: Magical 8 Bit Plugin, DR SID (c64 drum machine) Famisynth II, Proto PSG.
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Hello!
Catchy, I also like those simple waveforms 
You asked constructive criticism, so I will try to help, giving my personal thoughts.
- You can guess the end of the track is quite brutal. But even for a unfinished work or a test, I personally like to render a bit more after the track, so last notes leave some echo/reverb : not "cut" effect. Easy and efficient
- My ears are a bit tired after working on my own tracks, but I think the delay is note sync with the tempo of your track. most of the time in electro or chiptune, I feel a tempo sync between the delay and the track make it really cool. for example echo delay on 1/2 note. In software like Ableton, you can set a different delay between left and right, you can try left:8 and right:4
- I think an intro without kick could be good for this track, maybe with the melody coming from distance? The track starts really fast
- Maybe a little vibrato or volumee change could be a good idea on your saw lead, to add some details
- Probably personal tastes, but the kick is a bit loud for me.
Hope it can help, have a nice day!
CastleNes
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