Saturn Valley

how'd you manage to sync a dmg and a brain? i have sometimes have trouble with this. just kidding haha. great song!

Thanks Jredd I really appreciate your critique. This also isnt the first time you have given me well thought out response.

Constructive critique is hard to do on a song like this. All I can really do is tell you why I enjoyed this one . There is plenty of work put into everything from the sliding bass, to the fantastic percussion and the interesting way that you handled the leads. I don't hear any notes that clash, or any transition to another part that feels out of place. The only thing that I might even consider as a small critique is perhaps the majority of the song hovers around the same chords. Not that there is anything wrong with that, it works beautifully. Perhaps throwing in some different types of progressions with different chord structures might give it a neat feel to it if done correctly, then again it might ruin the charm that this piece already has. In any case, I can't think of a critique big enough for you to seriously consider changing things so you'll just have to take my gushing praise instead . This is a great song, and you should be proud of your work. Nicely done!

i like this