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Indirect Output

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Indirect Output

By TEOMAWKI on Apr 5, 2014 8:10 pm

Made with 1X DMG. I would really appreciate some feedback! big_smile

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

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Thanks for the feedback. I will look into changing it some! Thanks!

I've just discovered chip music as a thing, really enjoyed this smile

I started listening and when the melody came in, I thought, "This is the kind of stuff I want to write."  I thoroughly enjoyed it and can rock out to it.  It has a good structure and does something new and interesting just when I was hoping for something new and interesting. I especially like the bass drum breaks and the 'sound effects' (not sure what else to call them, e.g., at 112"), although the sound effects are maybe a tiny bit overused.

Endings are always tricky, but I think you could play around this one a bit.  Even just taking out that last long note might be worth trying.  Also there's something about the stereo separation that gets to me when listening with headphones.  I can't quite place it, is sounds like the bass is out of time in one ear or something like that.

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