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Looking back

By Volt 44 on Jul 4, 2014 5:35 am

sitting on a stone you were all alone feeling like you never had a chance to fly away
thoughts were dressed in black
looking back

taken by the flood never understood drying off the blood and falling into the abyss
all this rage and pain
from a kiss

I was always lost love came at a cost broken and I never thought the day of light would come
put your hand in mine
we are one

I see you in my dreams at night

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sounds really nice! voice works really well, texture totally fits the 8 bit stuff, no fear blast it out!

It's the part about being afraid. Committing is terrifying. I might give it another go though. Thanks for the feedback.

This is surprisingly great but it sounds like you are recording in a room where you are afraid to sing loud or youare monitoring too quiet . You gotta commit!

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