No Swimming
By Ypmid on May 28, 2013 9:02 pm
From my first attempt at making an EP of chiptunes.
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No Swimming
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The music itself reminds me almost of rayman for gbc very good stuff here i think you should make more like this song its fantastic great work
You did a good job of accomplishing your goal with those sound effects. 
btw, In my earlier comment I meant to say *"I feel like the percussion COULD BE a bit stronger and more insistent, particularly the kick and snare" if you were confused...
I forgot to answer Sketchman3. Those sound effects are made up to get those retro childhood tears flowing!
Thanks for the comments guys! I should completely stuff this song with more everything!
I really like it, just I think you should layer it a little more, then I think it will be epic!!!
Funky cool. That arpeggio gave it a nice atmosphere. Intro section sounds a bit like a preface to something dramatic, like a big showdown is about to ensue.
It had a really light feel. I can't decide if that's a good or bad thing. I feel like the percussion a bit stronger and more insistent, particularly the kick and snare.
Were the video game sound effects from any particular game, or are they just original sounds you designed to vaguely evoke that nostalgic feeling?
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