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By Zimbolt on Aug 25, 2013 10:28 pm

i dont even know

This submission is licensed by author under CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)

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thank you sir!

Interesting piece. The rapid arps are cool sounding but not very... musical I guess? They start to sound good at the part with the tempo shifts though. I also like the more melodic bit toward the end, and I like the varied drum beats, although I kind of wish it settled into a groove somewhere? I don't know. This is a weird piece to comment on,  because the chaotic sound and incongruous elements are simultaneously what's interesting and what's offputting about it. I will say, though, that the piece could feel a lot better if the drums meshed with the instrumentation more. Right now they feel like they're coming from two different universes.

Don't really care for the vocal sample at the end.

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