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By bun_muffins on Nov 11, 2015 1:16 am

so this is my first ever track on lsdj, it isn't long but it's a start

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Member has requested constructive criticism

http://chipmusic.org/daandruff/music/roadblock

i think he for example keeps the flow at sec 54 he changes but goes faster back to the old pattern

you now i often listen at the beginning and then skip through the song to check it out faster

but your start is just ... wow .. keep it up !

at sec 30 i think the flow is destroyed try to add more sound instead it sounds less and the build up stops

really nice work i hope i see more from you ;D

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