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Some LSDJ demo

By combatdave on Aug 2, 2010 7:03 pm

Just a demo/preview/whatever of a song I've just started working on. It's not laid out properly yet - there are some bits I think I want to remove and I still want to add a few more things, but... yeah. CC would be nice.

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o! you still do exist!!!!

The beginning was the only part that really stood out to me, (compared to other songs of yours) but the rest was still quite catchy. I think it would be nice to add a few more distinguishable leads at certain parts of the song. It kind of seems like a lot of the melodies and leads you have going are more backing leads instead of a main one. That's my opinion, but it also depends on what kind of style you are going for. The intro reminded me of 4mat's Paper Dolls.

good wip. the quirky wav twirp in the beginning is a bit irritating, and the overall sound/mixing needs to be more consistent. also the heavy use of external fx at the end is unnecessary i think. other than that it's pretty solid work.

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