Poppy's Adventure

This was a fun listen!

cool, thanks for the ace criticism i'll bear those things in mind

the rhythms are really fun ~.30; i like the 'whnnnnnnaa' at .42  

this covers quite a lot of ideas which is fun, although for me it's not quite clear how sections relate to each other, and feels a little like a number of ideas put next to each other; i think it might help to try to guide the listener more deliberately through different ideas, different paces, building up to energetic parts, etc. to help manage the variety

for example, from start to .22 is intro, establishes a melody (does other melody material relate to this? i couldn't quite tell); from .22-.42 is some nice rhythms, picks up some speed, but then from .42-1.00 this is sort of dropped but still feels like a build up and i'm starting to get a bit lost, forgetting what i heard before; then finally at ~1.00 main melody instrument introduced then 1.13 melody enters -- ..

i love the change into the section from 3.20 sounds really nice, the contrast works really well there thanks for posting

I really like the first half, the second part with the vocals and the frantic beat/arps isn't my cup of music. However, I admire the attention to detail and arrangement that went into this, very well crafted. Looking forward to more