<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> 2013-05-13T17:27:17Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/10300/feedback-on-a-hardcore-chiptune-track/ <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> This is a really old thread.

Monotron wrote:

You can be lighthearted and still make serious music that sounds good, but when you make lighthearted music with no direction and randomly you start heading down a dangerous path to ant1hood.

What are you talking about ant1hood is a great place to be. I agree that it is a dangerous path to travel, though.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/SketchMan3 2013-05-13T17:27:17Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/168007/#p168007 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Well better lyrics would help, also better vocals as far as recording. Less repetitive and add some instrumentation variation (That sounds like a school house rock title) and well work on song writing more so than throwing something together in half an hour and yelling over it. Drums/noise channel was good but I would definitely take some time to sit down, and plan the song out. Work on some music theory, even if it's by ear:

http://www.noisechannel.org/tag/music-theory

You can be lighthearted and still make serious music that sounds good, but when you make lighthearted music with no direction and randomly you start heading down a dangerous path to ant1hood

The "This Formal Goodbye Would Not Be Complete Without A FUCK YOU" is really good, do more stuff like that.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Monotron 2013-05-13T05:37:00Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/167973/#p167973 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Bit wish wrote:

whorish self publicity maybe

actually no need to get mad. no need

]]> https://chipmusic.org/xX+8+BIT+CHAMPION+Xx 2013-05-13T02:16:13Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/167959/#p167959 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Full CC: My first impression of the song was that it was a play song, simply for fun, not meant to be taken seriously. If you want CC on songs you shouldn't say their a joke, especially on this website, the members are old and cranky and don't like "kids" like us. (Or maybe just the internet in general) I thought the beginning was power full and i felt like it could of turned into an aggressive song. I honestly wouldn't put this on my iPod VS. your other stuff which seemed more Melodic.
I am not a fan of the breakcore/chipcore stuff,so this is just my opinion. If your looking toward more aggressive music i would listen to some more unique stuff... This link here might be more effective then the stuff that they make now. http://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/935/n … ssenkampf/
The release was made by my friend STereoChan. Who went on to be a very good producer and musician.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Bit+wish 2013-02-28T21:03:19Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157933/#p157933 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Cooshinator wrote:
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

So, what should i add to make this song better?

If it's a joke then why do you want to make it better?

Because man, i want to make good music but i want it to be kind of lighthearted and silly. You get me?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/I%27mHeadingForABombShelter 2013-02-28T20:52:52Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157932/#p157932 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

So, what should i add to make this song better?

If it's a joke then why do you want to make it better?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Cooshinator 2013-02-28T20:31:03Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157928/#p157928 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> So, what should i add to make this song better?

]]> https://chipmusic.org/I%27mHeadingForABombShelter 2013-02-28T20:26:51Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157924/#p157924 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Cooshinator wrote:
I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?

And that video gave me cancer

whorish self publicity maybe

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Bit+wish 2013-02-28T13:33:03Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157863/#p157863 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> I'mHeadingForABombShelter wrote:

Not meant to be taken seriously, kind of a joke or parody if you will.

Then why, out of all songs, did you ask for CC on this?

And that video gave me cancer

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Cooshinator 2013-02-28T03:51:43Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157833/#p157833 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> It was an improvement but i wouldn't put it on my iPod. If your wanting actual cc i can go full force.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Bit+wish 2013-02-28T03:42:32Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157832/#p157832 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Victory Road wrote:

yeah the double kicks are going off
maybe get a stronger attack going on them

Will do

]]> https://chipmusic.org/I%27mHeadingForABombShelter 2013-02-26T21:14:31Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157650/#p157650 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> yeah the double kicks are going off
maybe get a stronger attack going on them

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Victory+Road 2013-02-26T08:49:43Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157602/#p157602 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> godinpants wrote:

Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.

Thanks! i've been working on improvement smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/I%27mHeadingForABombShelter 2013-02-26T08:33:37Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157597/#p157597 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> Huge improvement on your earlier stuff.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/godinpants 2013-02-26T07:19:21Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157587/#p157587 <![CDATA[Re: Feedback on a hardcore chiptune track.]]> rasta_dan wrote:

im actually digging that

Thanks man! smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/I%27mHeadingForABombShelter 2013-02-26T06:51:07Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/157585/#p157585