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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some constructive criticism for my chiptune/guitar music]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[jmc1987]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-08-18T22:40:41Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Looking for some constructive criticism for my chiptune/guitar music]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>This is super refreshing. Great job man <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /> looking forward to see more of your music. It&#039;s not complex or awe-inspiring, but it&#039;s fun and pushes a couple of cool different angles on tonality.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[thebitman]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-08-18T22:27:58Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Looking for some constructive criticism for my chiptune/guitar music]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hey, this is my first post here, but I&#039;ve been lurking for a while. This site is an incredible resource and really helped me get started in toying around with LSDJ.</p><p>I wanted to get into chiptuning to create backing tracks I could play guitar over, since at this point, I don&#039;t have enough spare time to ever consider putting a band together and I really love the sound of chipmusic. I had recently found my GameBoy Pocket (I know, it has its critics, but it works fine for me) and ended up picking up a Drag N Derp cart before they disappeared from Kitsch Bent. </p><p>Over the past several months, I had been writing songs on both my guitar and LSDJ, usually figuring out notes on the guitar, then transcribing it in LSDJ. I recorded everything in GarageBand, though at least one track was made before I had my Derp cart and was exported from an emulator.</p><p>Well, after obsessing over mixing the guitars to blend right with the chiptune, I finally got 5 tracks I&#039;m pretty happy with and put them together for an EP, titled &quot;Reasonably Priced&quot; - because it&#039;s a pay-what-you-want download on Bandcamp and a $4 Kunaki CD-R-on-demand. I&#039;m going under the name Portopak, named after the infamous commercial scene from Abel Ferrara&#039;s THE DRILLER KILLER (I had sampled it in my first experiment with LSDJ and GarageBand, but it didn&#039;t fit in with the other music). In fact, the cover art for the EP is a screencap of that scene with the GameBoy &quot;color&quot; profile.</p><p><a href="http://portopak.bandcamp.com/" target="_blank">http://portopak.bandcamp.com/</a></p><p>One thing I&#039;ve decided is that I definitely want to make shorter tracks for any future recordings. 3+ minutes can be a bit grating for an instrumental with my limited musical ability.</p><p>I&#039;m particularly proud of the first two tracks, &quot;Take it Easy, Dracula&quot; and &quot;No More Nights,&quot; especially the latter, since I was curious what something very slow would sound like, as most chiptunes I&#039;ve heard and the other tracks I made were pretty fast-paced. After cutting in some samples from CARNIVAL OF SOULS, it became way more haunting than I had imagined.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[jmc1987]]></name>
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			<updated>2013-08-18T22:06:17Z</updated>
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