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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Give me some feedback on my latest song!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>hi, some feedback :: the reverb on the main lead instrument is a bit strange, imo it makes the instrument sound tinny and almost out of phase. idk do you know what i mean?</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[defPREMIUM]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/defPREMIUM</uri>
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			<updated>2013-10-03T09:21:56Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Give me some feedback on my latest song!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hello, I checked out your this latest one and other songs too. And they all are lovely and melodious to listen but what I have seen you have very low audience. SO, my suggestion for you to use the <a href="http://xorbots.com/soundcloudautomator.php" target="_blank">soundcloud automator</a> to enhance your audience and expose yourself from the crowd of soundcloud.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[merlinriver]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/merlinriver</uri>
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			<updated>2013-10-03T08:40:15Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Give me some feedback on my latest song!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Pretty nice.&nbsp; I dig the melody but was definitely itching for maybe a B section with a more profound variation on it perhaps?&nbsp; For my taste, I would say a bit less reverb overall, but I wouldn&#039;t nix it entirely or anything.&nbsp; Doing a little bit to jazz up the drums a bit might be beneficial.&nbsp; Even if it&#039;s only a coupla extra hi-hats every four or eight bars or something to keep things rolling.&nbsp; It kinda &quot;humanizines&quot; things a bit and makes things sound a bit more natural and interesting.&nbsp; Even something subtle like changing the envelopes on things ever so slightly in alternating sets of measures can create the illusion of greater variation throughout.&nbsp; Keep cranking &#039;em out.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Hypnogram]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Hypnogram</uri>
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			<updated>2013-10-02T01:16:50Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Give me some feedback on my latest song!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>So, this is the latest of my songs I&#039;ve made, please give me some constructive critisism on it if you want! <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/teknikbanken/unfinished-song-remake-new" target="_blank">https://soundcloud.com/teknikbanken/unf &#133; remake-new</a></p><p>Teknikbanken</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Teknikbanken]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Teknikbanken</uri>
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			<updated>2013-09-24T15:10:48Z</updated>
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