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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - chiptune critique]]></title>
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	<updated>2014-02-13T19:10:23Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: chiptune critique]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Alright, thanks!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[HYPERACTIVITY]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/HYPERACTIVITY</uri>
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			<updated>2014-02-13T19:10:23Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: chiptune critique]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I don&#039;t think they&#039;re crap. They are a bit monotonous because your technique isn&#039;t very sophisticated, but listening to your most recent tracks vs. your earliest ones, I&#039;d say you&#039;re making a lot of progress in terms of both composition and technique. I&#039;d encourage you to explore using more complex instrument voices and effects and more dynamic variation. Also, many of the songs meander quite a bit melodically, and lack much differentiation in sound and feel between different sections, and I think they might benefit from some attention to these areas. </p><p>But really, you seem to be doing fine at figuring this out on your own, so just keep at it.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Brother Android]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Brother+Android</uri>
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			<updated>2014-02-13T19:03:17Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[chiptune critique]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hey, I’m new to composing chiptunes and it would be much appreciated if I could get a critique on some of my songs, and if you think they are total crap feel free to tell me so. <br />These were composed using 1 Game Boy DMG and LSDJ.<br />Thanks! <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/big_smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="big_smile" /></p><p><a href="http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track/the-feeling-of-chaos" target="_blank">http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track &#133; g-of-chaos</a></p><br /><p><a href="http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track/the-fix" target="_blank">http://hyperactivity.bandcamp.com/track/the-fix</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[HYPERACTIVITY]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/HYPERACTIVITY</uri>
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			<updated>2014-02-13T17:24:25Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/200545/#p200545</id>
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