<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> 2014-08-26T06:50:04Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/15067/looking-for-constructive-criticism-on-my-lsdj-track/ <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> danimal cannon wrote:

That dotted quarter note pattern is a tell tale sign of a table without H commands.

I'm gathering that you mean the dotted quarter notes in the pattern starting at about 14 seconds?

And that's all right any pointers in the right direction a muchly appreciated. smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/CatchinAshes 2014-08-26T06:50:04Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216051/#p216051 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> That dotted quarter note pattern is a tell tale sign of a table without H commands (that isn't a bad thing), just one of those things you can't unhear. A few of my early tracks have that.

Also, sorry I'm not more helpful.  Get into using your wave channel for bass.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/danimal+cannon 2014-08-26T06:21:38Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216049/#p216049 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> sleepytimejesse wrote:

Yeah but every AUS musician (chip/otherwise) I've met has been killing it

› Yet another reason we were sent to this penal colony in the first place.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Calavera 2014-08-26T06:03:55Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216047/#p216047 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> Calavera wrote:

We're convicts, 'wanting to do better' is in our blood.

Yeah but every AUS musician (chip/otherwise) I've met has been killing it

Just keep doin' what yer doin' guys

]]> https://chipmusic.org/sleepytimejesse 2014-08-26T05:37:55Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216046/#p216046 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> RJL wrote:

Needs bass

Thanks for feedback. will start working on the bassline.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/CatchinAshes 2014-08-26T04:34:29Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216044/#p216044 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> Needs bass

]]> https://chipmusic.org/RJL 2014-08-25T20:20:47Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216023/#p216023 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> defPREMIUM wrote:

why are there so many australians asking for cc!
; )

Maybe somebody in aus quit chiptune and gave away their carts.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Dire+Hit 2014-08-25T17:16:05Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216012/#p216012 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> We're convicts, 'wanting to do better' is in our blood.

But yeah, I've already given CC on facebook. Will be interesting to see what other people have to offer here.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Calavera 2014-08-25T12:20:42Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216002/#p216002 <![CDATA[Re: Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> why are there so many australians asking for cc!
; )

]]> https://chipmusic.org/defPREMIUM 2014-08-25T10:50:28Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216001/#p216001 <![CDATA[Looking for constructive criticism on my LSDJ Track.]]> I would like to introduce myself. I'm CatchinAshes from Melbourne, Australia.

I have been using LSDJ for about 2-3 months and this is the first time that something i have done that resembles a song.
I realize the only way I'm going to get better, other than practicing is to start getting constructive criticism from other artists.

I very much appreciate you taking your time and listening to my track and giving me feedback this really means a lot.
I understand that I have a long way to go and anything that will help me improve will be taken seriously.

https://soundcloud.com/catchinashes/life-is-changing-v3

Thanks again,
CatchinAshes

]]> https://chipmusic.org/CatchinAshes 2014-08-25T09:47:00Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/216000/#p216000