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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>killedatschool wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>Its not my third attempt, just my third completed song. I&#039;ve been tinkering for a year or so.</p></blockquote></div><p>Aha, that makes more sense <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Calavera]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-27T07:15:51Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Its not my third attempt, just my third completed song. I&#039;ve been tinkering for a year or so. I have a library of hooks just no song to carry it.</p><p>I totally agree about it teaching me music. When I see all the notes in front of me I start noticing patterns, and i&#039;m &quot;oh this makes sense&quot;. I&#039;ve been playing guitar for about 20 years. 12 of those years were in a punk band and i&#039;m just now learning music from a toy! Love it. </p><p>Thank you for the feedback.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[killedatschool]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-27T03:10:01Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Yup, listened to this last night. Very impressive, especially for a 3rd attempt at LSDj.</p><p>Tight drums, great harmonies, and yeah, obviously some very rock/punk/screamo goodness going on here. Really loved the composition of the all the different sections and their progressions.</p><p>By the sounds of it, you&#039;re a musically-illiterate guitarist like myself (with a strong ability to play by ear because of it), so I know exactly how you feel about &#039;finding the notes on the neck&#039;. I&#039;ve found over the last couple of years though that LSDj and (more recently) learning to play keys is teaching me a fair bit about notes, scales, chord progressions, etc. It feels good.</p><p>Definitely looking forward to an EP or similar <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Calavera]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-27T00:20:48Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>Kool Skull wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>yeah dude i heard this last night, sick shit! i really like the breaks in the beats and melodic structure. not much is repeated and the parts that are repeated feel like they SHOULD BE. good stuff all around honestly. i like the breakdown with the solo. fuckin smooth ass solo. god damn it i need to focus on really sweet LSDJ solo&#039;s. it&#039;s a bit hard for me since i can&#039;t PLAY it out on a keyboard. prolly should get a LSDJ keyboard soon. wicked stuff! hope to see a release soon!</p></blockquote></div><p>To repeat or not repeat a phrase or chain is a constant battle for me. Typically I don&#039;t like to do verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge, chorus, end. If it works for the song, sure. I love songs that constantly evolve. I had other parts that I wanted in this song but they did translate well from the guitar to the gameboy. Don&#039;t know if that is because I chose poor instrument values or it&#039;s just something that sounds better on a guitar. Its still on the .sav file waaaaayy down on the bottom so I can always tinker with it. Maybe when I put out an actual release it will sneak it&#039;s way in. </p><p>The solo was tuff because I don&#039;t know scales. It took me a while to finger some notes together that I liked. I pretty much just jammed along&nbsp; to the backing track for a day or so until I decided to start punching it in. It would be burned in my head while I was at work and I would whistle out the lead then come home and find those notes on the neck.</p><p>Im so humbled by the responses from all of you. Thank you so much.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[killedatschool]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T20:01:59Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>yeah dude i heard this last night, sick shit! i really like the breaks in the beats and melodic structure. not much is repeated and the parts that are repeated feel like they SHOULD BE. good stuff all around honestly. i like the breakdown with the solo. fuckin smooth ass solo. god damn it i need to focus on really sweet LSDJ solo&#039;s. it&#039;s a bit hard for me since i can&#039;t PLAY it out on a keyboard. prolly should get a LSDJ keyboard soon. wicked stuff! hope to see a release soon!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Kool Skull]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Kool+Skull</uri>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T19:26:52Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>jonny5 wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>OK, that was awesome!!&nbsp; More like that please.&nbsp; Really enjoyed the tempo changes and drum fills, as well as the melodic harmony.&nbsp; You&#039;ve really captured the essence of poppy punk and applied it to the gameboy.</p><p>Great stuff!</p></blockquote></div><p>Thanks! I like the drum fills a lot also. Each song I do I try to do something different. This song was really about percussion. Squeezing as much in as possible. Kind words. Thank you.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[killedatschool]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T15:47:41Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>OK, that was awesome!!&nbsp; More like that please.&nbsp; Really enjoyed the tempo changes and drum fills, as well as the melodic harmony.&nbsp; You&#039;ve really captured the essence of poppy punk and applied it to the gameboy.</p><p>Great stuff!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[jonny5]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T15:08:31Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<div class="quotebox"><cite>J3wel wrote:</cite><blockquote><p>This track is awesome! Like the comments on the track itself it feels very much like you&#039;ve written it on a guitar and transposed it over which gives it an almost Rock type feel.. love it!</p></blockquote></div><p>That&#039;s exactly what I did. I play by ear so I&#039;m naked without the guitar. I don&#039;t know what notes I&#039;m playing so it took a while to punch it all in. It&#039;s really cool to get a visual of what I&#039;m playing. It&#039;s like the gameboy is teaching me theory. Glad you like the track. More to come!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[killedatschool]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T09:54:43Z</updated>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>This track is awesome! Like the comments on the track itself it feels very much like you&#039;ve written it on a guitar and transposed it over which gives it an almost Rock type feel.. love it!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[J3wel]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T07:24:48Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[First song i've ever posted. Would love some feedback!]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>A lot of you guys have really helped me out learning about lsdj and the gameboy. I can&#039;t thank you enough. This song isn&#039;t my first song but the first i&#039;ve posted. Lemme know what you think.</p><p><a href="http://chipmusic.org/killedatschool/music/axolotl" target="_blank">http://chipmusic.org/killedatschool/music/axolotl</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[killedatschool]]></name>
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			<updated>2014-08-26T00:16:34Z</updated>
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