<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - I need an honest critique of my remix]]> 2015-09-02T08:09:05Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/17038/i-need-an-honest-critique-of-my-remix/ <![CDATA[Re: I need an honest critique of my remix]]> Totally agree with Boner, this needs drums.
Also the instruments (bassline, keys, vocals) need more seperation in terms of volume, sound and octave.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/madpew 2015-09-02T08:09:05Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234150/#p234150 <![CDATA[Re: I need an honest critique of my remix]]> 1. this is a cover not a remix

2. it's missing the percussion which keeps the entire track moving forward, especially the woodblock on the back beat.

3. either bring the vocal line up an octave so it stands out, or don't make every voice sound exactly the same. the latter is a better option.

as is it sounds like a chiptune player piano version of the song. technically the sequencing is completely fine, it's what you left out that's the issue.

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Boner 2015-09-02T02:37:27Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234147/#p234147 <![CDATA[I need an honest critique of my remix]]> I made a remix of Earth Wind and Fire song September. I think this remix is the best remix i have ever constructed but my friend thinks its absolute garbage. I don't know if i am to attached to my own remix or that I'm right. I can't seem to discern whats great and whats awful . HELP

Link to the song : https://soundcloud.com/ubaldur/earth-wi … ldur-remix

]]> https://chipmusic.org/UBaldur 2015-09-02T01:15:53Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/234145/#p234145