<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> 2015-10-09T21:28:57Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/17170/critique-por-favor-lsdj-goodness/ <![CDATA[Re: Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> Dissonance you say? I'll look into it.

It is a pulse kick. I don't really use the wave channel for kicks, I should experiment with that some more.

And thank you!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/nstory 2015-10-09T21:28:57Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/235289/#p235289 <![CDATA[Re: Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> I really like the texture beginning about 10 seconds in. Good use of commands to achieve a variety of FX.

I'm hearing dissonance in a lot of places where the different voices don't seem to be on the same chord or are playing clashing notes. I'd have to listen more closely to say exactly where the problems are, but I would try to tweak some notes to fix that (unless that's what you're going for).

I feel like the kick drum sound is getting in the way of the bass notes. Are you using pulse kicks? I prefer kicks on the wave channel so you can use a lower octave.

Good stuff, keep it coming!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/QuietMind 2015-10-07T13:09:30Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/235222/#p235222 <![CDATA[Re: Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> Ta very much!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/nstory 2015-10-05T22:14:58Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/235164/#p235164 <![CDATA[Re: Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> This is super satisfying sonically. Very videogamey in composition. Personally I am partial to strong melodies, but I think this track is a win for those without such hangups. Very well done smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ecce+homo 2015-10-05T19:09:35Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/235150/#p235150 <![CDATA[Critique por favor? LSDJ goodness!]]> Well, I can safely say this is the best song I've made so far.

But I'm somewhat biased. So how does it hold up? Be kind! smile

Edit: A link would help. https://soundcloud.com/nostalgicstory/b … fault-demo

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