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	<title type="html"><![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - What do you guys think of my first proper lsdj tune?]]></title>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What do you guys think of my first proper lsdj tune?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Well I thought the melody (wav channel sounds) with the telephone-ish arps worked. Didn&#039;t really have a plan for the track, I just wanted to make a cool tune.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[IceWolf]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-11-26T16:16:09Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: What do you guys think of my first proper lsdj tune?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I&#039;m super into the swells and the noise but the melody and arps are often not in key. At first I thought it was intentional but by the end it&#039;s clear that either it wasn&#039;t or the idea is overused and doesn&#039;t work. The noise channel is really good but I would revisit the melody. What are you going for with the melody exactly? Did you want it to be dissonant?</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ecce homo]]></name>
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			<updated>2015-11-25T21:15:26Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[What do you guys think of my first proper lsdj tune?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Yes I know I should give it a proper title first. Anyways here&#039;s my first decent lsdj tune <a href="https://db.tt/YE9MLLYY" target="_blank">https://db.tt/YE9MLLYY</a> . Let me know what you think.<br />It was made during the summer, I just didn&#039;t upload it for a while.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[IceWolf]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/IceWolf</uri>
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			<updated>2015-11-23T15:04:08Z</updated>
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