<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Some of my work - would love feedback]]> 2016-03-08T02:11:21Z PunBB https://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/17557/some-of-my-work-would-love-feedback/ <![CDATA[Re: Some of my work - would love feedback]]> Thanks for all the great feedback guys, glad you all enjoyed listening to my stuff. Panda + Havocc, will probably extend + loop them down the line smile

bleakprospects wrote:

1st song: intense, reminds me a lot of some old boss battle music. It's all very well put together. My only criticism is the lead is maybe too harsh, but hey that's your style.

3rd: leads are very loud. They are interfering with each other a bit harmonically. Song gets really awesome around 1:24, very nice harmonies. Song takes me on a melodic journey, really sweet!

Glad you liked them, probably going to come back to Seaside Village and play with the mix a bit down the line, the leads are pretty loud.

Also please check out my latest track if you get a chance. It's a remix of the Seaside Village one only trying to convey the energy of a bustling city instead of a quiet little town.

https://soundcloud.com/lamontjackson/port-town

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ThePoorMouth 2016-03-08T02:11:21Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/241172/#p241172 <![CDATA[Re: Some of my work - would love feedback]]> 1st song: intense, reminds me a lot of some old boss battle music. It's all very well put together. My only criticism is the lead is maybe too harsh, but hey that's your style.

3rd: leads are very loud. They are interfering with each other a bit harmonically. Song gets really awesome around 1:24, very nice harmonies. Song takes me on a melodic journey, really sweet!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/bleakprospects 2016-01-28T18:34:34Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/238976/#p238976 <![CDATA[Re: Some of my work - would love feedback]]> These are seriously awesome! I could listen to these for hours! But like havocCc said, I kinda wish they went on for longer tongue The arrangement is incredibly tight, and instrumentation is spot on for the styling, keep it up please! big_smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/Panda+Chan 2016-01-17T23:02:21Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/238546/#p238546 <![CDATA[Re: Some of my work - would love feedback]]> That's some sweet work dude. Really enjoyed all of these 3 songs, they're very delightful and cheering smile
The only thing that bothers me is that they aren't long enough tongue big_smile

]]> https://chipmusic.org/havocCc 2016-01-17T21:40:56Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/238545/#p238545 <![CDATA[Some of my work - would love feedback]]> Hey guys, been exploring chiptune composition and arrangement as a hobby over the past few years and am constantly trying to improve and develop my sound palette.

Here's some boss fight music I put together recently for a game my friend and I were working on, would love to hear what you guys think of it.

https://soundcloud.com/lamontjackson/vs … mmer-final

Also, here's an arrangement of Copacobana in stage music style I threw together to make a friend laugh.

https://soundcloud.com/lamontjackson/vs-barry-manilow-1

Lastly here's my most recent track, village music inspired by Pokemon/Link's Awakening.

https://soundcloud.com/lamontjackson/seaside-village

At the moment I'm using plogue chipsounds and a fairly decent NES soundfont for the drums all in conjunction with Fruity Loops.

Cheers!

]]> https://chipmusic.org/ThePoorMouth 2016-01-17T20:29:49Z https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/238541/#p238541