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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[How to improve my Chip Hop song! Feedback please]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>So I made this west coast rap song but I feel something is lacking. While I know it needs to a rapper to really be complete, I think the verses in particular are cumbersome and repetitive. This being said, I don&#039;t want to get all experimental with it. Simple 90&#039;s gangsta rap. I just feel like the song is lacking in teeth somehow.</p><p><a href="https://soundcloud.com/zachcourseymusic/west-coast-1-rough" target="_blank">https://soundcloud.com/zachcourseymusic &#133; st-1-rough</a></p><p>tl;dr<br />Give me ideas to spice up my gangsta rap song</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Zach Coursey]]></name>
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