<![CDATA[ChipMusic.org - Looking for criticism and insights]]>2018-03-16T18:15:20ZPunBBhttps://chipmusic.org/forums/topic/19390/looking-for-criticism-and-insights/<![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]>Awesome energy. This is cool.]]>https://chipmusic.org/oxygenfad2018-03-16T18:15:20Zhttps://chipmusic.org/forums/post/255832/#p255832<![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]>try experimenting with your wav channel and make those kicks punch me in the face real hard.]]>https://chipmusic.org/Ninten+Kwon+Do2017-01-24T03:53:22Zhttps://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250733/#p250733<![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]>Will do, thank you! I think I have a lot of low bass going with the wav channels, maybe switch one of those out? It's just a raw recording, didn't isolate any of the channels and balance them at all. I might try recording the pulse 1 and giving it a little tweak before doing the wav redo?]]>https://chipmusic.org/cr33P0ch2017-01-24T03:15:49Zhttps://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250731/#p250731<![CDATA[Re: Looking for criticism and insights]]>Maybe add a deep kick to bring a bit of movement and structure to the composition. That may not be what you're looking for though. Parts of this sound really baddass!
Edit: After listening to Red Water, just bring the volume of the kicks up a bit.
]]>https://chipmusic.org/HimsyPimsy2017-01-23T23:17:45Zhttps://chipmusic.org/forums/post/250726/#p250726<![CDATA[Looking for criticism and insights]]>Hey all! I've been making chip with LSDJ for a long time now, but get mixed reviews. I'm hoping I can get some thoughts on what to work on or change, or if it's just the genres I'm working with that aren't working. I listen to doom, drone, sludge metal, etc. and have been working to create a fusion with chiptune. Please give this track or any others a listen and let me know! I appreciate anything you have to share!