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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: I need some feedback on my first 0cc-Famitracker tune]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for the advices, I&#039;ll try to do it Gala. Now I&#039;m also practising in LSDJ. I want to do some good stuff with it. <br />Thank you too Jellica, for the next songs I&#039;ll make good drums and bass (with more effects) <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ドラゴンJOKE]]></name>
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			<updated>2019-09-16T16:33:57Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: I need some feedback on my first 0cc-Famitracker tune]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>work on some nicer drums and bass, it will really make a difference to the track :)</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Jellica]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Jellica</uri>
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			<updated>2019-09-11T18:16:06Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: I need some feedback on my first 0cc-Famitracker tune]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I think you need to work more on details. I quite like the melody but it would be better with some variations and little details. Enveloppe and volume fades, are nice things to add for example.</p><p>A good exercise for learning a new software is to try to understand and copy some parts of songs you like (done in famitracker or not).</p><p>Keep up the good work!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Gala]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Gala</uri>
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			<updated>2019-09-10T13:16:15Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[I need some feedback on my first 0cc-Famitracker tune]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>My first tune made with 0cc-Famitracker.<br />Here there&#039;s soundcloud link: <a href="https://soundcloud.com/doragonjoke/fox-hemisphere" target="_blank">https://soundcloud.com/doragonjoke/fox-hemisphere</a><br />Let me know what you think of it, thank you ^_^</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[ドラゴンJOKE]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/%E3%83%89%E3%83%A9%E3%82%B4%E3%83%B3JOKE</uri>
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			<updated>2019-09-08T10:03:07Z</updated>
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