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	<updated>2011-05-09T13:52:59Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/66012/#p66012"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>No problem...everything else is so much better now though <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /> Great job with the timing this time around!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Frostbyte]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Frostbyte</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-09T13:52:59Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, still need to get this mixing thing sorted, doesn&#039;t help that I&#039;ve got a massive subwoofer so the bass is alot louder than it would be for anyone else <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/tongue.png" width="15" height="15" alt="tongue" /></p><p>Thanks for your help though <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[include music.h]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/include+music.h</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-09T10:54:31Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65987/#p65987</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65836/#p65836"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>edit: double post</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Frostbyte]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Frostbyte</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-07T22:30:30Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65836/#p65836</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Timing is a lot better, and the transitions feel a lot better and the hi hat isn&#039;t as awkward. Sounds really good man! Maybe you can pump up the drums a bit more in the mix though haha.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Frostbyte]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Frostbyte</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-07T22:30:24Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65834/#p65834"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/settings-shtml/track-1" target="_blank"> New version here </a></p><p>Made changes to the mix and timing and also worked on the latter part of a song a bit more, bit more metal now <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p><p>Let me know what you think!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[include music.h]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/include+music.h</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-07T22:25:13Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65834/#p65834</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks,</p><p>The timing is probably due to my really sloppy guitar playing, I&#039;ll try recording to the gameboy track instead of the other way round. </p><p>@Frostbyte I was going for that proper raw sound of guitar and gameboy, maybe once the guitar is mixed in properly it&#039;ll be less sharp.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[include music.h]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/include+music.h</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-06T22:36:04Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65721/#p65721</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>yeah sort that mix out, the guitar is real loud, the drum real quiet.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Jellica]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Jellica</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-06T08:35:11Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65634/#p65634</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
			<link rel="alternate" href="https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65615/#p65615"/>
			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>There seems to be a lot of timing issues and the hi hat in the first drum part is really awkward...Other than that, It&#039;s pretty clever though. However the transitions from 8 bit to guitar are a bit sharp, but if you&#039;re going for that &quot;low level coding&quot; feel I guess it makes a little bit more sense.</p><p>Overall, not bad. The bass could be higher in the mix, I didn&#039;t really hear any of it. I&#039;d like to see this when it&#039;s all done <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
			<author>
				<name><![CDATA[Frostbyte]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Frostbyte</uri>
			</author>
			<updated>2011-05-06T03:53:46Z</updated>
			<id>https://chipmusic.org/forums/post/65615/#p65615</id>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Feedback on demo of track]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Hey,</p><p>I&#039;ve just finished putting together a rough idea for the first song on the demo I hope to put out later this year. It&#039;s inspired by Chiptune, Punk / Post-Punk and Metal (post-meptune? Chipcore?) and I&#039;d like to hear what you guys think of it.</p><p>Made using a DMG with LSDJ on it, guitar and bass and MIDI drums into Garageband. </p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/settings-shtml/whats-blue-and-fucks-old-demo" target="_blank"> #include &lt;music.h&gt; on Soundcloud </a></p><p>Thanks <img src="https://chipmusic.org/forums/img/smilies/smile.png" width="15" height="15" alt="smile" /></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[include music.h]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/include+music.h</uri>
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			<updated>2011-05-05T22:41:38Z</updated>
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