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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>your percussion section needs more variation. for not lossing any power you should variate the second half of the 4/4 (open hi-hat and such). also, if the kick gets fuller the sound of the track will evolve a lot.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Analog]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-06-05T09:34:08Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>I changed it up a bit, thoughts?<br /><a href="http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-dce" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-dce</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[pnada]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-06-05T03:20:06Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the tips Analog, do you have any suggestions on how to variate the percussion without losing rhythm? Pulselooper, what do you mean by that?</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[pnada]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-06-04T23:54:36Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>make more love to the noise channel.</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[PULSELOOPER]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/PULSELOOPER</uri>
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			<updated>2011-06-04T20:28:22Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Re: Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>interesting WAV channel.</p><p>the song is repetitive, which is not a bad thing. but the use of more variation could be interesting. more development is heard near the end, i suggest that you should try it before.</p><p>that kick is good, but i guess you can make the percussions better and stand out more, as an important part of the variation and in a more dedicated sound design.</p><p>keep it up!</p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[Analog]]></name>
				<uri>https://chipmusic.org/Analog</uri>
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			<updated>2011-06-04T19:34:46Z</updated>
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			<title type="html"><![CDATA[Thoughts on my song?]]></title>
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			<content type="html"><![CDATA[<p>Just wondering what you guys think about my song.</p><p><a href="http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-pce" target="_blank">http://soundcloud.com/pranda/toeys-r-tite-pce</a></p>]]></content>
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				<name><![CDATA[pnada]]></name>
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			<updated>2011-06-04T19:09:03Z</updated>
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